I thought this poem flowed really well and the imagery and words that you gave to the readers was really great. I found no mistakes or problems that jumped out at me, also I think your title is very creative and it seems to me it must have taken a lot of thought. Though this piece was sad and heartbreaking I found myself wanting to read it again and again, thanks for posting!
Peace,
Snickerdooly
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